He said open your eyes, nothing's
gonna change...
She said when emotions are true;
change is out of range..
He said why should we choose to get
hurt again and again..
She said, getting hurt is akin to
being alive, relations are dead if you feel no pain..
He said how could you still smile and
greet memories, so disdain..
She said no matter how black the
patch is, my memories stay porcelain..
He said damage is done there's no
scope of rectification..
She said, all happens for good,
failures leads me to perfection..
He said why don't you learn from
mistakes and get practical...
She said, I can't see any mistake, I
follow my heart, and my heart is amicable..
He said reaching out is insanity when
you yourself is down with bruises..
She said no its sane as indulgence
helps me forget; it gives me excuses...
He said be a bit blunt else people
might use you, take you for granted...
She said let them, they are doing
what they want and I'm doing what I always wanted...
He said my perception differs, my
side!! You will never ever understand...
She said, yes I might not be
understanding, but i still have a reaching out hand...
He said so you feel nothing, no anger,
no pain, no remorse, no rage...
She said who says I feel nothing, But
what's the fun keeping injured bird in the cage..
He said so you will keep on being
what you are, you won't tame...
She said I'm proud of what I am; I’ll
choose to stay the same...
He said but this nature made you
suffer, still you'll choose to be?
She said yes coz this very nature
earned me a friend like you, so I'll still choose to be me..
He smiled so you choose to sideline
errors and forgive the mistakes...
She smiled no but I choose to forget darkness,
I’ll do all that it takes..
He murmured I really don’t understand
what's going on...
She whispered, there are few zones,
when we are beyond right and wrong...
He concluded, no matter how right you
seem to be, but I know even my side is true..
She concluded, so lets both be what we want to be.. Let
me be me! and you be you!!
I think she is right in every aspect...
ReplyDeleteBut here he and she both are you....
Once again awesomely written......
Truely speechless..
Kanu
Very well written ...Any relationship demand acceptance of person as he or she is....We like others because what they are and not for what we want them to be....He trying to convince world is harsh and she trying to follow her angel heart....very good balance of two feelings...Thanks a lot to share thisssss
ReplyDeleteI realy love it..
ReplyDeleteWhat an intense and meaningful conversation and how beautifully you penned it...
ReplyDeleteIntense yet effortless thats your style..
Best!
Very true..very touching...gr8 work minisha
ReplyDeleteBeautiful struggle of heart verses mind..
ReplyDeleteLove it......
So nicely expressed...
ReplyDeleteYes it's true people who follow heart quite often get bruised..still they don't change their path, they just can't
Mini.. just b what u are...
A gem!
conflict of heart and mind..... a very true and a honest expression of feelings.one who feels by heart and follow his mind can understand the depth of the words being spelt out here. it really require loads of laods of expereince to write with this conviction.i honestly accept tht u are really doing justice to ur liking .keep writing and keep tickling our grey cells .eagerly waiting for your next peice of wonder .tc and happy writing.
ReplyDeleteShabaaaash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLovely story of
ReplyDeleteHeart and Mind
Scare and Dare
Courage and forgiveness
Beyond relations...
Very well done friend....:)
So... Now... What do you ve to say
ReplyDeleteWasn't he right ? all alomg
It's a conflict of heart and brain dear.
And this world thrives on decision taken by brain and needs, Heart has no value.
Dare u delete my comment again sis.
It's one of the best that I've ever read! Amazingly written :D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful choice and expression of words.
Abhi Chauhan