Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Just A Story....




Horror gripped the heart of that boy as he saw his lifelong best friend fall during the riots. His friend was caught in claws of this carnival of violence, with continuous gunfires and screams hurling from all directions . There was an utter chaos whizzing over boy's head and ballade of death in front of eyes . But the boy stood, stood unfazed with just a single thought lurking in his head, what if he leap in and make his way through? He might, he just might bring his fallen friend back.

He was holding his brother's hand ,shaking and shivering with anticipation. All sweaty with threat of what might happen. “You want to go?,” asked his brother, “but i don’t think it will be worth it. Your friend is probably dead and you may throw your life away.”  The brother’s advice didn’t matter, and the boy went and jumped into the death pool anyway. Miraculously he managed to reach his friend, hoist her onto his shoulder and bring her back to the safe corner of that disturbed city. As the two of them tumbled in together on the rough patch near the lamp post, the brother peeped in to check the now wounded and bleeding boy, and then looked kindly at his friend.
“I told you it wouldn’t be worth it,” he said. “Your friend is dead and you are mortally wounded.”
“It was worth it, though, my dear!,” said the boy.
“What do you mean; worth it?” retorted his brother. “Your friend is dead.”
“Yes, She is” the boy whimpered in pain. “But it was worth it because when I got to her, she was still alive and I had the satisfaction of hearing her say through her last breath, “I knew you’d come. I just knew”


15 comments:

adhi nayak said...

Supppppa like Minzzzz!!!!! Keeeep up the goood worth of Frenship with ur blogs!!!!!

shivam said...

This story
what do i say
speechless!!

Raj said...

Hey, i am like totally in awe of you mini
you are evolving by each passing day
hats off!!!

Anonymous said...

An artist that you are, you play with emotions in such a smooth way
you tend to touch the right chord at the right time
this story clearly exposes your soft and vulnerable heart
keep it up!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

heart touching!!!
overwhelming!!
beautifully expressed!!

Anonymous said...

superlyk .keep it up .nyc

Anonymous said...

i really loved it.

kanu sharma said...

Your this story proves friendship is the most precious relation we have in our lives....

The only relation which in which we always trust our friend more than us.

Thanks for writing a wonderful story which shows trust, love,and that precious bond which friends share....

You owe a respect from core of my heart for this superb story....

Truely speechless,
Kanu....

deepak singhal said...

Fantastic..& heart touching....

shilpa said...

It is difficult to feel the actual deepness of friendship unless one has breathed it.The way you have
picturised remarks about how you have been so true with the friendship,how you have embraced it in your life,
how friendship matters to you.
A person who can inhale and sense the beauty of friendship in this way can only be the true friend of anyone, and ofcourse
i must you are :)
Really you have shown to the world the divine of friendship...A very beautiful message through your sweet story :)
I m delighted to the peak to read this :)
Keep shedding your beautiful thoughts as always :)

bhavin bhavsar said...

I know it would keep coming and I would wait for more

Amol said...

Very true about friendship....
Trust is another name of friendship...
friend in need is friend indeed....
you have touch the soft corner of true friends...
very well written and every word of your story make me feel do ppl care this now a days... friendship is lost in selfishness ....
World is very colorful with friendship....
Thanks a lots...

manish said...

superbbbb is the word which i can say....the depth which u have brought out the thoughts speaks volume abt u.the morale abt love, faith and freindship which you brought out so beautifully really touched my soul and made me realise my onus towards my dear frnds. keeping knocking our heads with such awesome thoughts minisha...once again a gud job done.

Ritu Singh said...

its just amazing ... Beautiful words which completely touched my soul. Love u and keep up the good work di....!!! waiting for more new touching stories. Hatttss offf.....

Anonymous said...

I loved the deepness of your story :) It was really sweet!