Sometimes all you can give is an unconditional love
Sometimes all you have is just not enough
Sometimes life is like an extended dream
Sometimes dreams aren’t what they seem
Sometimes giggles can ease your heart
Sometimes the same giggle breaks it apart
Sometimes thoughts spin faster than you move
Sometimes even fastest spin is the slowest groove
Sometimes solace is the only word on mind
Sometimes solace is the only space you can’t find
Sometimes you give in to queries that each pang implies
Sometimes same pain turns you nonchalant to replies
Sometimes flights of dreams is a soothing respite
Sometimes same dreams poses the biggest fright
Sometimes togetherness has all the delights in store
Sometimes solitude is all that you crave for
Sometimes night gets too dazzling to withstand
Sometimes even dawn can withdraw her hand
Sometimes you just surrender to convictions
Sometimes conviction goes through incisions
Sometimes story in your head is beyond eviction
Sometimes reality you lived in,turns out to be a fiction
Sometimes you live and relive few memories to satiety
Sometimes you sleep endless hours to ward off memories
Sometimes I think am I the person what you see?
Or is it just the reflect of what you want me to be....
Sometimes I painfully conceal,those emotions so white so true
Sometimes I proudly pretend coz I am what you made me ,I am you......
I like the way you play with words
ReplyDeletebeautiful creation!!
An amazin talent at display...
ReplyDeletelove your work!!!!
In love with your work...
ReplyDeleteThere are very few write ups to which i can connect myself to.. and this is one of them... Readin every line makes me feel as it renders a page from my past.... Great work... Seriously very touchy ...
ReplyDeleteFrom where do you bring these thoughts?
ReplyDeleteevery time i read your poem, i feel is this the same girl i know?
Such soft and simple girl yet such strong emotions at display
you are a artist!!!!!!!
Awsumm thinking...u've jotted down the innocent thought process of an innocent mind...no strings..congratulations
ReplyDeleteAwsumm...u hv penned down the innocent thought process of an innocent..yet progressive mind..congratulations
ReplyDeleteVery true and pure thoughts.....only innocent heart can have such feeling.... Awesome creation... Sweet and touchy...
ReplyDeleteI must say u ve demonstrated the truth of life.The way u ve appended the outline of one's life through your beautiful words
ReplyDeleteand innocent thoughts is highly appreciable.
I m sure the readers who would read this writing of yours' would definitely realise themselves and
feel the charm of life :)
U have joined the two corners of a river of thoughts through your writing :):)
In this busy world i do realise that your creations definitely work as a source of meditation for me and i feel
good about myself.
.You are really a very excellent writer.Have no words to express for your creation.
Keep going as i think god has given you the rights to change the outlook of our life :)
I must say u ve demonstrated the truth of life.The way u ve appended the outline of one's life through your beautiful words
ReplyDeleteand innocent thoughts is highly appreciable.
I m sure the readers who would read this writing of yours' would definitely realise themselves and
feel the charm of life :)
U have joined the two corners of a river of thoughts through your writing :):)
In this busy world i do realise that your creations definitely work as a source of meditation for me and i feel
good about myself.
.You are really a very excellent writer.Have no words to express for your creation.
Keep going as i think god has given you the rights to change the outlook of our life :)
Beautifull poem with bbeautifull words
ReplyDeleteJust don't no how can someone thought beautifully sometimes...
ReplyDeleteThere are no words for me what you write sometimes....
But whatever u write sometimes...
Surely hit our hearts every times...
Sometimes a word is enough to cherish your creation.
ReplyDeleteSometimes even words are not enough to praise your creations.
Just a thought from me.....��
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