Thursday, February 14, 2013

His Visage and her beauty....

Eyes, she borrowed dreams from
Eyes, she envisioned herself through
His eyes, her epitome of innocence
His eyes, chaste like morning dew
All felt so right, felt like eternity
His visage, graced her with beauty

She conjured his care in a small space;
Space that beamed with his compassion
A little space hidden in folds of her heart
That little space brimming with perfection
All felt so right, felt like eternity
His visage, graced her with beauty

His Smile, radiant like morning rose
That Smile, like dreams on prance
His smile, like a child’s innocent prank
That Smile, like her reverie on dance
All felt so perfect, felt like eternity
His visage, graced her with beauty

His Words, a stairwell to heaven
His words, like comforting rain
Words, an anchor to her sinking soul
 Words,like soothing ice to burning pain
All felt so right, felt like eternity
His visage, graced her with beauty

His visage, way beyond expressions
Visage, radiance of breaking dawn
His visage, tranquility of first rain
Visage, an elegance of dancing swan
She protected this visage in her bounty
All felt so right,all felt like eternity

A little space in some hidden corner
He resides there painting her dreams
Oh! His visage, that exotic spell on eyes!!
An aura on display,touching all extremes
This raving crazy insanity
Feels so right,feels like eternity

Seasons changed, time took a leap
Sorrows and smiles, more than they could reap
But, still his visage shines through her entity
Yea! still Feel so right, feels like eternity
His visage definitely graces her with beauty







8 comments:

bhavin bhavsar said...

Thank you for making up my day with your priceless gem.
Thanks again

kanu sharma said...

How can anyone play with words so beautifully.

True example how talented you are.....

Truly Speechless...
Kanu

Amol said...

Very beautiful valentine story...
Thought of special people bring smile on face......
Happy valentine day

charu said...

beautifully potrayed...u r amazng mini

manish said...

wow is the word which i can only use for ur write up. after a long time i m seeing someone who plays so beautifully with words.i must confess u made me think and think hard how can i define a friend , lot of permutation and combination i did and finally the most apt which i cud rely on was words of some unknown author which definately filled the vaccum of my thoughts and i here dedicate to u in ur honour....

A Best Friend!
A friend that really cares!
All my secrets i can share!
There when i need a hand!
There to understand!

When i cry!
She will be by!
If i am away!
She will call me day by day!
If i need her at all!
She'll be there to stand tall!
Anything i say will be heard!
She will listen word by word!
If I am late!
She will open the gate!

As she looks in my eyes!
The sparkle she realize!
She is the one that cares!
And the one thats there!

That's a best Friend!!

keep writing and keep enriching us with wonder words.

Anonymous said...

His visage and her beauty..
The connection..
The perfection...
Your creation.........

Anonymous said...

What do I say ...
You are a spell binder
Keep it up minz
Your poems r reflection of your pure and innocent heart
Innocent dreams of an innocent heart

CA Pallavi Kakkar said...

♥♥♥♥♥ amazing mini ♥♥♥♥♥